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  • pink lemonade!

    pink lemonade! (100)

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    Yes Lol the Mom did do it. And it's for a one shot contest and maybe I will continue it. Maybe...
    October 22nd, 2011 at 01:19am
  • Sutton Mercer

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    The mom did it?
    wow i loved it!
    Wish there was more!
    October 19th, 2011 at 02:19am
  • Shawn Ashmore

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    Ahh that's amazing! Really enjoyed reading it! I love all the mystery about it, and the twist at the end was just... OOOOH. II was really onfused by the name Diana, completely threw me off guard, then I saw the little note below it. Ah it was amazing! My only criticism is that you say how Ivy is 8 years old, but she would be turning 10 in a few months. But I completely understand a little mistake like that ;)

    Absolutely amazing entry, can't wait to get judging in a few weeks! Well done! :)
    September 21st, 2011 at 10:53pm
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