I believe x.Kris.x has said it all. All of the points I wanted to make. This would be a great story, but it all depends if what you have is concrete. I love your writing and I'm so happy you've decided to do some a7x fanfics. You've inspired me to write so much more and you put my smut to shame. I was all drooling through out the whole thing. Keep doing what you're doing because you're doing an amazing job!
Holy shit that was hot. I need to go take a shower now lol. That was pretty amazing. I'm not sure if it should be a full length story, because I'm not sure how much further you could take it without being cliche, you know? I'd definitely love to see a companion piece with Grace though. I've always been a ZV girl, although this definitely made me appreciate this picture a LOT more: Sweaty Syn
Haha, I love it almost as much as your banner. But anyway, this was once again fantastic. Maybe just make it like, a two or three chapter story where she meets the band and they get down and dirty. You KNOW Syn would totally brag about being the first to make her cum, but I'm thinking Matt would probably want to challenge and bring up some sort of sexual experience she hasn't undergone yet...was that hint for a threesome? Maybe...:D Haha! Yeah I'm just twisted and perverted, and I'm not afraid to admit it. Either way, I'll be following to see what you decide to do!
Wow now that is freaking HOT! Ariel has never had an orgasm with her past boyfriends? But now Brian has cured that for her since he gave her multiple orgasms that night. Man I bet Zacky and Jimmy just loved her friend especially when they first met them since she bluntly said that she wanted to get laid! Her friend is definitely satisfied!!!! ANOTH SEXY AND AWESOME ONESHOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved it as always. I loved it that he called her little mermaid. You should most definitely make this into a story it would be awesome. I love the banners you make I wish I could make banners like that.