Everywhere Everything - Comments

donia is perfect because shes fucking donia and such a good writer and is just generally all around AWESOME

justin richards is perfect. because i mean..hes god so duh

this story is perfect

this is one of the best stories i've ever read. Congratulations, it's amazing!

This story was perfect. You are a fantastic writer(:

as promised, here's my comment.
Rusty is perfect, initially I expected... the other one, but I'm glad he wasn't her dad. I love how you ended the story and I'm glad Lena forgave Brayden, this whole story was just perfect! I can't really type much more without giving the story away and I wouldn't want to deprive anyone of the ending and Rusty (to reiterate, perfectperfectperfect.)

Ah, I'm going to track down your other stories now I know who he is.

I found this story a while ago, but forgot what it was called. It was always playing on my mind, so stoked I've finally found it again! You're an incredibly talented writer, I remember reading up to where you reveal Brayden's dad so I'm rereading the whole story. I'm still clueless to who Rusty could be, kudos to you for being so good at hiding it! I'll comment again when I finish reading.

I only told you on tumblr, so i figured id tell you here too! This story is great and im glad you ended it the way you did. youre a great writer and anyone who tells you differently can suck it.

The way you ended the last three chapters were perfect. I'm glad, as weird as this may sound, that Justin didn't accept her right from the get go. It makes the story seem more real, if that makes sense. I had to fight back tears several times. You are one talented writer. For those who read this comment other than Donia, I suggest you read the other fanfics she wrote because it gives you more background on the other characters. I can't believe this story is over! It's bittersweet! Continue writing! :D

AWWWWWWWWWWWW I just started reading to night and its been laughs and awe's and crying <3

this was seriously one of the best stories I've ever read. extremely well written

this story was absolutely one of the best fics i've read. i love it so much. it was so different from all the others i've read. keep up the good writing! <3

this story was so well-written! gibbs is probably my favorite character, he was so funny. one of my favorites definitely :-)

I read this in 2 hours and I just wanted to say that this was the best story I have ever read! I'm so proud of you and of Carolina. thank you :D

I don't give comments like this usually, but when I do I absolutely mean it. This story was wonderfully written. I just spent my whole morning reading this because every aspect of this story kept me intrigued and I was hooked the minute I started reading it. It had mystery and romance with a flair of comedy, the perfect kind of read. I have to say it is SO refreshing to come across a genuinely well written story on this website, one that has just the right amount of everything in it and includes a writer that actually knows what their writing. I like a writer that knows when things need to come to an end and although I haven't read your other stories I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Bravo.

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wait so who is rusty omg im sorry

CAN I JUST SAY THAT IM ON CHAPTER 5 AND THIS IS THE COOLEST STORY I EVER READ SO FAR

HEY I JUST STARTED READING THIS AND OHMYGOSH MY FEELINGS IM CRYING YET OMG

I really loved this. thank you.