LOL. What?! That's disturbing...
December 5th, 2013 at 09:37am
This was a fun read :D I love how you took the pairing and the prompt and made it your own; using the Time Turner was a really great way to make this unique. I also like the subtlety of Lupin's attraction to George. It's there, but it's so small, almost like Lupin's unsure and nervous of George's reaction, and it's really cute :3 A quick interaction, but with their hands touching and the way he looks at the twin...gahh.
Your dialogue for Fred and George is really spot-on, by the way. “What in the name of Merlin’s baggiest Y-fronts happened?” I was giggling xD
Also, this is kind of a random side comment, but I liked the way that this story was written with George having an adventure separate from Fred. In the books and films we see them doing everything together, which is nice and all, but this was refreshing in that George had his own little escapade all to himself :3
All in all, this was really enjoyable to read. Great job! And good luck in the contest!
Made me laugh. Actually, it made me sputter, "Doctor- Who- Harry-George-Remus-Time turner-Ohmygods YES." But that's hardly the point.