Sparkle Baby, Shine - Comments

Please update this. I went to reread the old version of this and I couldn't find it, I loved it so much!

im enjoying the rewrite, keep up the good work!

im really liking this new version. im in love with this story.

still as cute as ever :)

Still reading :)

I loved this story the first time so I am so excited to read the new version! I cannot wait for the next chapter. :)

Still reading and still loving itm

This is my favourite! x

Hi, I'm reading.

But, in all seriousness, wow! That was fantastic. I love the Alex's perspective, and the way you described Amelia. I can see her perfectly. Also, updating so quickly was great, too! ;) Anyway, please update again! I loved it, I really did, and I want to read more Alex/Amelia action! AAA! :)

Cant wait for more.

Oh, gosh, I'm so glad you updated! I've been waiting to read more! I like the direction of this story and I simply cannot wait for another chapter. I demand you update more often, and I don't care how many comments I have to leave you in order for you to do so! I love this story, I love YOU for writing this story, and I can't wait to see where it goes! The plot line is great so far, this edition seems a bit more mature, and Sparkle Baby, Shine is just destined to be a great feature. Love, love, love it.

im so glad youre going to continue to write this. im pretty excited <3

I hadn't realized that you started re-writing this, I'm really looking forward to where it's going!!!! I love it already. =)

I love the totally mature edge youve put on this new version. Amelia is so much more focused and less lost, and alex less the crazy party guy and more like Simone who wants to do good, but is a little lost himself. Its perfection characterization and i love the more formal wtiting style. Its something im a juge fan of, especially eith the occasional références to obscure détails like scents and feels. It makes it all the more vivid for the reader. Good work, I can't wait for the next update :)

I'm proud to be a reader of Sparkle Baby, Shine - and it's only the second update. I can tell how far you've come since the first edition of this story, and it makes me excited and anxious for the rest of this version. I love the way you've written Alex thus far, too. In many stories centered around Alex, people assume that he has no drive and they write him accordingly. But I love what you're doing with him so far. I really can't wait to see this developed. Update again soon, love.

I will read this story how ever many times you re-write it(:

Wow. That was such a great start to this rewrite. I loved the first version, but I can tell that I'll absolutely adore this one just as much, if not more. I love the way you've written the beginning and I can't wait to see where you take this. Keep up the good work. I have to say that I've been away from Mibba for a while, but this story alone makes me want to come back. Please update again sometime soon.

Damn. You deserve more comments than this.

If you do decide to continue, I'm sure it'll pick up as quick as the other version! Which is also great, might I add. I love this plot and the characters, so it'd be grand if you do rewrite it :-)

Sparkle Baby, Shine was also the first Mibba story I ever subscribed to so even though I'm no longer reading fanfics, I'll definitely tune in for this one.

Your story is amazing and I would definitely keep following it if you re-wrote it, it would be even better than before! I hope you keep going! (:

Your story is amazing and I would definitely keep following it if you re-wrote it, it would be even better than before! I hope you keep going! (: