Silent Plea - Comments

I like this story. The plot is extrememly intresting, and the characters are so dynamic. I feel like they could be real people! They seem to have real issues, and they interact like real people. The storyline is easy to follow, and is very intresting. You have real talent, so please keep up the good work!

I really like this story!
I think Arden is an awesome character and I really like the way her and John interact with one another. It is really interesting to read.
The story has a really nice plot that is easy to follow, so overall, you did a very good job!

Love it!!

The banner is perfect and so is the layout and summary. I wish there was more of a lead up to the first chapter, don't get me wrong I love how you jump into it but yea.... I really wish you would bring this back cause it would make my day haha. Because I don't really know where this is going yet :/

Sooo I'm not really sure what I think will happen but I'm definitely hoping that at someoint Arden will run into John and he'll be able to fix her!

Also I LOVE this story

Update soon!

I just want to start off by saying that I love the banner, layout, and summary. They all look really nice together!

The first chapter jumps right into it and just made me want to keep reading more. I love your writing; you use a lot of description and your overall writing style is really different and strong.

I like that you made the first from her POV and then the second chapter from his POV. It already gives me an idea about how each of them are as a character and it builds a good basis for the story!

I don't really know where this is going, but I'm loving it. It definitely seems like the type of story that has a few twists and is going to leave me with many questions at the end of each chapter!

Write more soon! : )

wow. that left me hungry for more, more about her and what's happened to her, anything. amazing<3

OH YEAH NEW STORY YEAH.
You're actually brilliant. In every way and I fucking hate you for it.
xoxo

Update now.