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  • CarynPikachau

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    how many times have i read this?? -_-''
    but it is adorable, aewseom, epic, sweet! ^_^
    i read this too much *sweatdrops* xx
    August 29th, 2010 at 10:45pm
  • CarynPikachau

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    oh mi gosh! this was really sweet <3
    i loved it xx ^_^
    August 4th, 2010 at 10:51am
  • Mad Porno Action

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    That one was really good as well, your a really good writer congrats xxx Love the way that one was written
    March 3rd, 2008 at 10:28pm
  • ella.

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    I loved the dialogue in this story, a couple errors, but that was amazingly done. Bravo.
    March 3rd, 2008 at 01:06am
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