ow owww(; Jordan Staal you're fucking sexy. James is so stupid though! The few boys that consider our feelings and it ends up screwing everyone over! So good thooo Please update
I'm going to be in love with half the league by the time I'm done your stories lol. Not a big James Neal fan, but you're making me see him in a new light. This is a really cute idea though, playing with the whole "one that got away" idea. I'm curious to see where you can take it, especially since James is struggling hardcore to break it off with his little fling since he thinks she's the reason he's being accepted. Oh who cares, the world should just be him and Natalie anyway lol.
it'll be interesting if natalie finds out that james is currently seeing someone...i can't wait for natalie's friends to visit! those will be fun chapters to read!
Honestly I have never given Neal a second thought or look. But I adore your writing - and i especially adore when you include a giant sexual tension chew toy named Jordan Staal in a story so I'm subscribing!
I think it's so cute that James and Natalie are both way too shy to say anything to each other....and i think they need to admit their feelings to each other before jordan messes everything up
I seem to be unable to utter anything but "EEEEEEPPPPP" at the moment lol love this! hehe jeeze, just imagining all these guys biking with their shirts off... we could make a lot of money off of that... A LOT OF MONEY! A FUCK TON LOT OF MONEY! *fans self*