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LOVE1516 (100)

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I read the first chapter and it's freakin awesome, i'm going to continue on now:)

March 29th, 2013 at 10:48pm

QuietSports (100)

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I like the story, though it could definitely use a lot of work. I will be keeping an eye on it as I am interested. Just a little bit of advice, to help the story flow better, using proper grammar, and not flipping back and forth between tenses helps. A lot.

December 29th, 2012 at 02:19am

kizza :D (100)

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Omg luv this story plz update soon!!!

November 13th, 2012 at 09:23pm

Dark0wolf (100)

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This is real good i can't wait for the next chapter pelase update soon this is great i want more god your the best so far you rock :D thank you for takeing time out of your day to entertain my ass

July 30th, 2012 at 08:52pm

DanniiDisasterr (100)

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Keep it going yeahh? Its amazing.

September 26th, 2011 at 03:50am

CaliCupcakeMonster (100)

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I like it, I hope you keep going, plz ; p

September 23rd, 2011 at 06:45am

FangsAngel (100)

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PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!

September 23rd, 2011 at 04:42am