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  • Selkhet

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    Oh my goodness
    PLEAAAASE UPDATE
    This story is fantastic! I absolutely love the character development and the plot is really good! Even the parents are well rounded and I just love every aspect of this work. I want to know what happens next!!!
    As far as I know, this is one of the best slash fictions I have read as of now. Please do update soon! :)
    December 2nd, 2013 at 04:37am
  • Selkhet

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    Oh my goodness
    PLEAAAASE UPDATE
    This story is fantastic! I absolutely love the character development and the plot is really good! Even the parents are well rounded and I just love every aspect of this work. I want to know what happens next!!!
    As far as I know, this is one of the best slash fictions I have read as of now. Please do update soon! :)
    December 2nd, 2013 at 04:37am
  • Hey Jude

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    I like it. Update? :)
    May 17th, 2013 at 07:19am
  • StillHearts

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    I've only read to chapter two thus far, but I can think of sooo much to say. Honestly, I've never really given slash stories much of a chance, but I'm very very glad that I did. Your characters, more than mose other writers can say, are very relatable. I dig that :P I'm super excited to wrap up this story soon. You've made a fan out of me x
    June 9th, 2012 at 01:39am
  • AnExaltationOfLarks

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    Finished Chapter 18! Very nice smut :P
    Seriously, I love this story. I just couldn't stop reading it and I can't wait to read more.
    Post more soon? Please?
    I don't know what I want to happen! I don't know if I want Nate and Tucker to end up together! Well, that's not true, I do, but I like Chase as well! Argh!
    Moooorrrre!!!!
    March 29th, 2012 at 03:46am
  • AnExaltationOfLarks

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    Just read the first chapter. First time in a while I've read something that has gripped me. You have a very nice, laid back writing style which I enjoy.
    Couple of constructive criticisms:
    1. "He ran the sink until the water was ice cold and cupped his hands under the water" Maybe change this to "Cupped his hands under the faucet/tap"? Avoids repetition?
    2. You spelled "relieved" "relived" near the end.
    Really do like it though, totally subscribing :)
    March 29th, 2012 at 02:25am
  • BlackRosesBleedBlack

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    Love it love love LOVE IT!!!!! its written so differently from a lot of things I've read on here. It feels fresh, almost. I like it :) keep it up! :D
    March 28th, 2012 at 04:05am
  • Love Me.

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    i like it read the first chapter and i'm subscribing :) glad you left a link to it when you left a comment on my story thanks for the comment btw :)) and keep up the good work
    December 31st, 2011 at 03:11am
  • puppenblut

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    I like it so far (: Please continue.
    September 25th, 2011 at 07:50am
  • Platypus;;

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    OMG I love this. :D
    I am subscribing right now!
    September 24th, 2011 at 12:57am
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