Five More Minutes. - Comments

  • yourpainfulnightmare

    yourpainfulnightmare (100)

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    Why aren't there more comments?
    Anyways, such a fantastic story! Once again, your writing amazes me, with all the details, and the perception of time. I also loved how the story ties in with the picture perfectly, with the quote built in.
    Also, I loved the sheer depth put into the Doctor's life, even with the little you've written. The talking to the TARDIS was the icing on the cake.
    So much to love! :)
    September 17th, 2012 at 12:54am
  • fairyfeller

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    I really adore this. The descriptions are beautiful! Espessially With it, he meticulously inks a tiny heart on the inside of the Doctor's wrist, treating the pen like a tattoo gun. When he kisses his masterpiece, he can feel warm blood flowing by underneath his lips, but the mentions of how long everything seems to take is also wonderful. I also love the way the Doctor talks to the TARDIS here, it seems very him.
    September 10th, 2012 at 09:40pm