This is actually really cute! I've only read the first chapter so far, but I definitely plan on coming back and reading more (I don't have the time right at this moment). You have a very nice, easy to read writing style. Your sentences flow nicely and I didn't find any spelling or grammatical errors. I love the concept of your story (I am a fan of twilight and always loved the pack boys) and I'm intrigued to see what will happen next. Did she just imprint on him? Does that mean that she's a werewolf too? Can't wait to read more! :)
I love it!!!! Hurry up and continue! I love the way it is heading and the wording is just right!! I especially love your layout! Who are the first two people from the left on the layout? I can't tell
You have a very nice, easy to read writing style. Your sentences flow nicely and I didn't find any spelling or grammatical errors. I love the concept of your story (I am a fan of twilight and always loved the pack boys) and I'm intrigued to see what will happen next. Did she just imprint on him? Does that mean that she's a werewolf too? Can't wait to read more! :)