Merely a Graveyard of Your Former Self - Comments

  • k.a.t.i.e

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    Holy crap I just found this story and just read it in one night! LOVE IT!!!!!
    July 3rd, 2013 at 08:14am
  • k.a.t.i.e

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    Holy crap I just found this story and just read it in one night! LOVE IT!!!!!
    July 3rd, 2013 at 08:14am
  • VengeanceIsMine

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    Wow finally got caught up in this and finished it lol
    This story was phenomenal !!!
    Loved this
    October 9th, 2012 at 05:59pm
  • clutchgeek

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    THAT WAS AMAZING.
    June 9th, 2012 at 05:41am
  • MotherMedusa.

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    is it bad that I laughed when she said no?
    lmfao omg I feel bad. I just wasn't expecting that. whoa.
    mindfuck.
    that sequel better be posted soon :p
    January 24th, 2012 at 09:11pm
  • FallxFromxSky

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    The ending - my mouth :o... actually, as I write this, my mouth is still hanging open. My parents will walk in here soon and wonder why I'm gaping at the screen like a dickhead.
    What-what-why? Why? WHY did she say no. I'm in shock, holy shit. They had sex - quite well written, as well - and then he asks and she says no. WHY?!
    Also, I liked how she dedicated the song to him - it made my heart happy ^-^

    I'm sad that this wonderful story is over - but I can't wait for the sequel! <3
    January 24th, 2012 at 02:45pm
  • Colorful_dinos

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    Finally it's over!...I'm not meaning it in a bad way! It's just ugh! There together!
    But I'm mad that she said no! But she has her reasons!..thanks for the story I enjoyed it!
    So now I will go subscribe to your story!
    January 24th, 2012 at 02:31am
  • lex;

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    WHY WHY WHY DID SHE SAY NO OH MYBTODFNFHDHEHXUESOXJDKSKS
    January 24th, 2012 at 12:53am
  • tipy

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    I loved it!!! Im still a little shocked she said no! But I'll have to go read the sequel to understand lol :)
    January 23rd, 2012 at 10:19pm
  • tipy

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    I loved it!!! Im still a little shocked she said no! But I'll have to go read the sequel to understand lol :)
    January 23rd, 2012 at 10:19pm
  • EmptyInside

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    well. i was gonna comment about how theyer such a great couple.. and then she said no.
    January 23rd, 2012 at 10:11pm
  • Colorful_dinos

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    Can't wait to see what happens next!
    Update woman!!
    Ahh! I'm excited!
    January 21st, 2012 at 12:53am
  • unsuspecting victim;

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    Not going to lie, I fucking love this c':
    January 20th, 2012 at 02:37pm
  • FallxFromxSky

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    NOOO, IT'S ENDING D: BUT THIS STORY IS TOO AWESOME TO E- Oh wait, there's a sequel. HELL YES :D
    I'm sorry that you took you a few times to write this, but it turned out awesomely, as all your writing does :)
    Yay for Dallas being let out! And Oli still being a sweetheart <3

    Can't wait for more - even if it's the last chapter :) <3
    January 20th, 2012 at 10:38am
  • tipy

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    Aw I can't believe it's coming to an end but I'm excited for the sequel :D
    January 20th, 2012 at 08:58am
  • smallxface

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    I like this chatper! (':
    January 20th, 2012 at 07:48am
  • lex;

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    YAY A SEQUEL ADFTHKKVU
    January 20th, 2012 at 07:17am
  • vmusicforlove

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    That was cute (: I liked how you conveyed your characters as not too perfect, you know? I liked their relationship. Ithink that you should be with a person that makes you better, not worse (: I lived Oli's character in this. It's hard to explain lol

    Just curious, was that the end? O.o
    January 17th, 2012 at 10:41am
  • MotherMedusa.

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    This was too cute :3
    January 15th, 2012 at 09:46pm
  • Colorful_dinos

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    I think there soo freaking cute hahah!
    If only they were a real couple! Lol
    January 15th, 2012 at 06:46pm