The ending - my mouth :o... actually, as I write this, my mouth is still hanging open. My parents will walk in here soon and wonder why I'm gaping at the screen like a dickhead. What-what-why? Why? WHY did she say no. I'm in shock, holy shit. They had sex - quite well written, as well - and then he asks and she says no. WHY?! Also, I liked how she dedicated the song to him - it made my heart happy ^-^
I'm sad that this wonderful story is over - but I can't wait for the sequel! <3
Finally it's over!...I'm not meaning it in a bad way! It's just ugh! There together! But I'm mad that she said no! But she has her reasons!..thanks for the story I enjoyed it! So now I will go subscribe to your story!
NOOO, IT'S ENDING D: BUT THIS STORY IS TOO AWESOME TO E- Oh wait, there's a sequel. HELL YES :D I'm sorry that you took you a few times to write this, but it turned out awesomely, as all your writing does :) Yay for Dallas being let out! And Oli still being a sweetheart <3
Can't wait for more - even if it's the last chapter :) <3
That was cute (: I liked how you conveyed your characters as not too perfect, you know? I liked their relationship. Ithink that you should be with a person that makes you better, not worse (: I lived Oli's character in this. It's hard to explain lol