I hate to admit I've probably re-read these chapter 6 times. I check this story like every hour in hopes of an update and for Jayden! Please update soon?
This story just makes my ovaries explode. This is, as Massie and her friends probably say, "totes cute." or "chill." I love this so much that I wish I could be one of her friends. I'd totally be Jayden Jabberwocky. Oh well, this Scene King can dream... Great story!
Quite funny! Even though she is a joke character, Massie is a very well rounded joke character and I enjoy reading from her perspective. She's lively and overly dramatic, which I realize is intentional, and it's just fun to hear her thoughts.
My only complaint is that the back story thus far is three chapters long. I find it okay when the first chapter is back story, but after that it really should just be sprinkled in, not chapters and chapters long. Mix background with real-time happenings. People can get lost or loose interest if the information part of the story goes too long.
Heh, I honestly love this too much. You just take every single cliche and write it out way too perfectly. Like, I laugh out loud when I compare this to stories I have read that were meant to be serious. :3
And oh, rockstars? Definitely Alex Gaskarth ;D Lmfao.
I really like this. It’s so cliché, but that’s a good thing in this case! You’ve got all the “scene queen” character down to a T. I know many people like that, sadly. This story makes me laugh, it’s fun to read.
My favorite line from Chapter 2 is, I love screamo music. My favorite band is Devil Wears Prada. My favorite colors are black and pink. I’m random. And then you put “Skittles.” Pure genius right there. This is a well-written parody.
I look forward to reading more and I’ve subbed! Great job on this. <3
I'll admit, the background doesn't really tickle my fancy, if you went for something a little more pink I think it would work better, but that could just be me.
ALSO, I CAUGHT ONTO THAT CHAPTER TITLE. As a lover of Sheen, yes, I have taken a liking to this. Though, "who cares, my life" I think there should be a question mark after cares and then start a new question. But my lord, this girl, I usually don't like parodies but this one has definitely caught my eye, mostly because she's all "YOU THINK LIFE IS HARD, LOOK AT MINE" all throughout that I can't stop smiling at her scene-queen-ness, and the all boys school, nice touch. I like her use of bitchin', it's a very underused word for awesome, I find. :D
I very much appreciate both the xoxo and the picture. RAHN.
Fuchsia pink is just so hardcore. But my god, the mentality on this girl, I think my favourite thing is that she's all "I'm a scene queen but I'm totally unique about it" because well... that's usually how those scene queen people think. :D
People who commit that kind of sin should be eaten by dinosaurs, like, seriously. I CANNOT EVEN.
Ohmygod I love her because she's everything that pisses me off. I seriously cannot wait to read more of this because it's she's so perfectly horrible and awesome at the same time. :)
This was really great so far, though I wasn't on all fours barking and screaming at my imaginary parrot. No, I don't actually do, just trying to give you and Miss Massie some 'hardcore' material to us, I guess.
This story is so awesome because my friend thinks she's a Scene Queen. Died her hair black and pink, wears Asking Alexandria tee shirts every day, and half of her weight is consists of eyeliner and hairspray. She always says things are 'crusty'. Like what the f*ck does that even mean?
My point is, I can totally get a few kicks out of this story so keep it up!(:
At first, I wasn't going to comment... But then I saw that "RAHNN!" Picture and I was like, "hehe. Lolz" This is great! Seriously funny(: Can't wait for more.
That was perfect. You really need to update soon. I have a feeling this story is going to get a whole lot of attention. & Massie thinks she is so bitchin'? She's not the only one.
Keep it up dude. This is some quality, scene, life-hating shet right here. ;D
I know you haven't updated this in a while, but if you still plan on it. The singer fro BMTH or something would be a good idea for the "instant love".