Maybe Things Are Not So Different. - Comments

  • odysseychic403

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    Love this so far(: did you know Craig has a little sister? I don't remember her name, but I go to school with her in Arizona....Avondale, to be exact.(:

    ~Laren<3(:
    March 9th, 2012 at 10:39am
  • flyers

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    Ohh I'm glad I got an update for this x). If it's an idea you're looking for, I'd go ahead and introduce Beau, unless you planned on him coming in later. If thats the case, you left off on a really nice place to just write Jared and Craig getting to know each other. Also, it would be a good idea to expand on Craig and Colten's home life. If a long-term idea for this story is what you're looking for, this plot seems a little cliche in the way where you can just have Beau and Craig have a lot of sex/sexy times until they fall in love or something. Ugh, this is really long but I can't space anything out like I usually do since I'm on my phone xp. Yeah, thats about it & good luck with trying to write more! :D
    February 22nd, 2012 at 12:06am
  • tainted love.

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    Are you going to update this soons? For meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee's?
    I wubbles it o.o
    November 20th, 2011 at 04:24pm
  • CraigMabbitt

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    I don't believe I read the first draft of this,
    but I really like it so far 8)
    Maybe break up the dialogue a BIT more so there's no confusion..
    I love how Craig is so protective over his brother
    And of course Jared is the PERFECT class clown crazy guy x)
    I'm looking forward to reading more of this. <3
    November 17th, 2011 at 07:23pm
  • Ty;

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    Update soon please, I'm taking a liking to this story :)
    October 9th, 2011 at 09:30pm
  • tainted love.

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    "I'm not late! Everyone just started class too early, and your clock is wrong!!"
    BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! XD
    October 5th, 2011 at 10:39pm
  • tainted love.

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    :DDDDDDDDD
    FUCK. I LOVE CHU BBY. I LOVE THIS STOREH SO FAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    October 1st, 2011 at 08:25pm
  • megooder

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    In love at the first line <3 Thank you!
    September 28th, 2011 at 03:14am
  • imchangkyun

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    *squeal*
    exciiiiiiiiited
    already love it ^_^
    September 27th, 2011 at 07:23pm
  • WithBleedingHands

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    I like how this is so far. :)
    September 27th, 2011 at 01:54pm
  • megooder

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    Im sad that ur deleting ur story, but i still luff u!!! Can't wait to see it, no seriously, i can't wait, UPDATE THIS THING!
    September 27th, 2011 at 04:46am