Untangle Me - Comments

I loved this! So cute :)

This is really cute!

Amazing!

I totally forgot reading that there was only going to be three chapters. I was bummed :(

Ah, I was getting excited at the end of the last chapter 'cause I thought there was more! Still really amazing, though, but you should have made this into a story! :-)

Awh. Cute (: you should make a story out of that xD after finishing 'some days' of course ;)

THIS IS JUST, it's too cute for words. This was just perfect.
It made me think of the movie, Black Swan.
Wonderful. And I love how straight forward John is.

First of all I really enjoyed the writing. I like how the mother, although pushy, was actually pretty realistic. You could tell she loved her daughter, she most likely wouldn't be pushing her so hard if she didn't, but her mothers dreams for Auden were quite different. I think most people can relate to this.
Overall I really enjoyed this.

Great job!

P.S.
I love the name Auden, it's so pretty.

I really like how you did this. Like its very different but you tied in Tangled really well. I love John - such a cutie. And Auden is a beautiful name and character. I like her a lot. The mother actually is the evil mother in Tangled, haha. A little nicer, which is good too. But I also like how you made this realistic. Like ballerina's have it bad when it comes to life, basically, and you portrayed that really well.

Good job! :)

i dont want it to end.
its beautiful.
<3

Sigh, John. :) This was beautiful. Loved it.

you should make this into a full story :)
im like in love with the whole idea
<3

i really liked this :3
...i have a feeling that john is there because he got in trouble...
and who can resist john!?
cant wait for more <3