Thanks. I changed defiantly to definitely. :D
November 19th, 2011 at 07:20am
This was a good one-shot. I liked it a lot. The layout was readable. That's a plus. One thing to keep in mind is grammar and spelling. You had a few errors, but nothing too major. Also, I've seen this happen many many times. Defiantly and definitely always get mixed up. It's a common mistake, but keep in mind the two spellings and meanings behind each word. I loved the flow of the one-shot. The breaks in the sections between one day and the next were really pretty. You gotta tell me how you do that....lol.
Good luck, great job. Winners will be notified.