There's a First Time for Everything - Comments

^^ have read the sotry
I told you I'd do it (I think I did say that al least)
It's mazing I luvs it ^^
And Keep on writing :)

lol thanks for the comments and tips much love and I apologise for the unpredictable updating. I'll try and work on that

You're fics pretty good, but you really need to work on the mechanics. Capitals are kicking your ass. "I" should always be capitalized, same with proper nouns such as names. Also, a new idea or a new person speaking should almost always get a new paragraph. Your formatting could use a little work. Since Mibba doesn't work with tabs very well, I suggest putting an extra line between paragraphs.

Other than that, its pretty good for a first time attempt. Definately room for improvement, though. I'm not really a big Billy fan. I'm more a Benji and Joel fan, but they've got such rotten taste (Hilary, Nicole, and now Paris? EW!). The fact that its a BillyxBill fic is kinda funny, though.

awww poor bill

lol, it would be like Bill wearing Tom's clothes!! :D
update soon!!

that is like, really good. i feel so bad for Bill though... aww...
i can also picture him crying like that....
update soon :) (but make sure Billy doesn't win, becaues i don't really like Good Charlett, lolz)

omg poor bill awesome story