Burning Fast - Comments

I still think you should do a full length to this, even if it is cheesey.

Damn I loved it so much! Matt and Brian that is a dream come true. I love your banners they are awesome I wish I could make banners like that. I can't wait to read more!

Yummy, I love me some Matt

Hot. DAMN. That was amazing

Holy shit!!!!!!!! 0.0
You have definitely made me want to take a cold shower!
I mean with Matt joining in and just blowing Ariel's mind and how Brian picked up after afterwards.
I think it was good thing that Brian stopped Matt from taking Ariel anal because she needs to be prepared and have trust in Matt that he won't hurt her.
But still Ariel got to have mind blowing sex with two of most hottest guys!!!!!
I look forward to Grace's sex marathon with Zacky and Jimmy!
ANOTHER AWESOME ONESHOT SMUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hotttttttttttttttt. Hot.
Love the banner, too :]

HOT
You did such a great job with this one.
I'm inspired to go write smut now and it's
because you do it so well :D

Sorry, I would have commented earlier if I hadn't had to go hop in the shower...again. Fuck woman that was the best compliment to Brian's magical night. Pretty amazing. It was a little awkward in the beginning, because I think maybe we were all just a little too eager to get to the sexy time. Ariel is such an awesome character, and so is Grace, so I hope that maybe for the companion piece you let a little more of their personalities come through, you know? You write fantastic erotica, so it's not like you can improve there, but maybe slide in a little more character development. It'd just engage us readers a little more; probably ruin some more panties too haha! This was awesome though. I like how you kept them all rough and tough, Matt trying to be dominant but Brian being adorable. She's still his little mermaid, AND he knows when it's too much for her. He is the perfect Dom. I love how you left it open too, about them perhaps continuing the relationship but not under any emotional pretences. We should brainstorm for the next one now :p haha. Either way, this was fantastic. Good job!

Great squel to your other oneshot!!!! This left my body all tingly. I still love the fact that Brian refers to her as his little mermaid!!!it's cute and funny. I really enjoyed this :)