The Grave Yard Girl - Comments

Hii, don't know if you remember but I'm the girl who wrote Steve the Dinosaur :) Anyway, I just got around to reading your story (oops, sorry about that) But I love this one!! I love your word choice and characters so far! Please post moar?? Haha, I'll be sure to subscribe!

(Also, I don't know if you want constructive critism because some people hate it, but just so you know, in the introduction chapter where it said he doesn't deserve to die you kinda put that twice... You may have intended that I don't know, just trying be helpful!!)

hey sexy!
Story sounds so good so far :) even thought you told me what happened :L
keep posting even if it's just for me? ;)
love youuuuu<3