didn't notice any mistakes so good job on that :D love this story and that chapter, just wish you'd update a bit more frequently, i'm excited to see where this relationship goes!
January 8th, 2013 at 09:57pm
Exceeding the Limit - Comments
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This is wonderful :) Can't wait for more!October 1st, 2012 at 04:19am
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you're forgiven but i NEED more. this is just too lovelySeptember 24th, 2012 at 02:54am
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I love it soooooooooooo much! cant even wait for more!September 24th, 2012 at 01:09am
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I love it soooooooooooo much! cant even wait for more!September 24th, 2012 at 01:09am
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Love it so far
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This is kinda cute :) I'm ready for more.August 13th, 2012 at 07:22am
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this is lovely (:August 13th, 2012 at 06:54am
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I'm already in love with this story. I hope you update soon! It's really good.July 26th, 2012 at 08:10am
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this is goodJuly 18th, 2012 at 03:20am
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Aw this is totally cute. I like how I can relate to Elle, because she's just like me. Already I'm telling her to stay away from Oliver, because he's the type of guy I'd fall for. I like how they're complete opposites, but I can see her falling for him anyway.
The only thing I'd suggest is to double space between paragraphs, because it makes it easier to read. ^_^
Anyway, I'm gonna subscribe, so keep up the good work!February 17th, 2012 at 04:44am
