I like the story idea but some chapters really confused me like when Dakota was dreaming. I'm not saying fix it but you may want to add the dreams in italics or have a separator so readers like myself know they're dreaming and not randomly running in the forest, whispering out Eric's name... But otherwise, awesome work. Keep it up. Reading True Blood stories will certainly keep me entertained until season 4 comes out on DVD and season 5 starts up again!