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  • Queen of the Fey

    Queen of the Fey (100)

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    Let me start off with: I LOVE YOU. AND THIS STORY. AND YOU FOR WRITING THIS STORY! Zelda is my favorite game in history and I have many fond memories of playing it with my grandmother.

    I like how you started the story--it has the feel of a fairytale at work and I simply adore fairytales. I can't wait to see why the king chose Link or what will become of Princess Zelda if her father learns about her sneaking out. I love this entire story! <3

    I'm awaiting your next update, sis! Please don't keep me waiting too long! <3
    January 18th, 2012 at 12:15am
  • Derek Fitz

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    I'm not much of a fan of fan-fictions, but this... I love playing the zelda games and I loved reading what you have of this story so far. I am extremely excited to read the next chapter.
    November 6th, 2011 at 07:50pm
  • wish on a firefly

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    First comment! Woot!

    Anyways, I love the layout and the banner. Both of them match really well. The summary really draws me in. And it doesn't spoil anything which is a very good thing.

    Chapter One:
    This chapter was short but it was good! It had a lot of details and I can imagine little Zelda being all hyper and a bit bratty when it comes to asking the adults questions. But this also has a touch of realism to it too, which is good. :)

    Chapter Two:
    Ahaha, I love Epona's introduction and this:
    "Link, you are truly a miracle worker." Corla admitted, climbing down from the horse. "As for you," She said, pointing at the horse, a stern, angry expression on her face, "You, Epona, are a devil horse! A devil horse, I swear!"
    ^That had me laughing because I could see it happening in my head. Epona was always wild one. ;D But that's why I love her so much. :)

    Corla is a little spoiled, isn't she? But I like how her brother keeps her in line though. I guess it takes a lot of strength to keep a girl like Corla in line.

    I wonder why Link isn't too thrilled about the letter? I'd be thrilled to be an escort if I were him. It's one good way to get recognized other than having to save Hyrule of course.

    Chapter Three:
    Now this is something new. Princess Zelda sneaking out? But why does she sneak out so often? What does she do?

    I can tell you one thing: I hate Maila. She is mean to poor Ayren and...yea. I just don't like her because she has a superior attitude towards Ayren.

    But this was a really good story. I'm subbing. :)
    October 31st, 2011 at 02:19am