Well, I thought Ryan's father was going to abuse him, that why he couldn't, but this is so much better and fits more with the first chapter. Gahhhh that's sooo adorable... are they going to kiss if front of Hayley? Hehe, I can see it now,
'HOLY SHIT! PATTY! DID YOU SEE THAT! BRENDON KISSED RYAN! OH MY GOD! HE KISSED HIM! OH! MY! GOD!'
Hehe, funny. I forgot to subcribe, so I went to see if you had a new story up, and well, it said chapter two, and I just checked my suscriptions, I was like What. The. Hell? So I subcribed now, and I double checked. More soon, you double awesome super duper good, amazing -insert other words for good here- writer. :]
I love this.It's amazingly written... I know, I'm terrible at reviews but that was so cute and I really, really wanna know if that's how Ryan flirts... [random] *subscribes* Can't wait for the next chapter!
You never cease to amaze me. You Ryden's are written so damn well. I'm looking forward to read more of this story. I don't know what it is, the way you write it, the description, the planning. I don't know, but it always has me looking at your profile to see if you have written another story. My favorite paragraph was;
After five minutes of frustrated sighing and randomly reading some texts in my book, it looks like the Gods in the sky have received my mental groaning, because the door of the classroom opens and Ryan enters the room. The lanky figure locks eyes with our teacher as if he’s sending her a mental message that only she can know about and then he mutters “Sorry for being later.†And of course, as usual, the teacher just nods understandingly; making me wonder what the hell there is to understand. If it had been me or one of the others being late, I’m sure we would have gotten a never ending preach for it. I must know what’s so special about Ryan that he can pull this off time after time.
Just amazing. Hopefully this will turn out as good as 'Just The Way I'm Feeling' and 'Haunted' or like your other stories. Keep it up.
More this Sunday (:
It must be the custest thing in the world :D