Innocent - Comments

Oh my gosh this was so amazingly written. Rape is such a hard topic to write and handle but you dealt with it unbelievably well. I loved every second of it, I feel like Delilah would be an amazing friend even with what happened to her.

Rape is always a tough topic to handle, but you’re handling it well and with much more respect than I’ve seen in other stories. It was tough to read, of course, but I like how you wrote how it affected her and how many other factors have shaped her as a person – she is a relatable protagonist, and the fact that she just wants to fit in is something that pretty much every teenage girl can relate too, and I’m glad she actually has a personality too. I’m just worried about how this new life of hers is going to work out…something tells me that it’s gonna end up biting her in the ass and leaving her almost as broken as she was before…you have a great knack for describing things without it dragging on (which I myself have a problem with, so props to you!), and I’m curious to see what happens! Great job! :)

I love the voice of this. The layouts pretty awesome too. its so amazing and different then anything I've ever read before also.

You must like the name Delilah lol.

I'm subbing to this one I like the straight forwards voice and description you use in this I like the personal POV and I like the realistic portrayal.

Over all keep it up and I'm liking the short to medium length chapters it makes it more digestible.

great so far <3

1. The layout is BEAUTIFUL and the banner, as well.
2. I love how the prologue draws you in instantly. It's very relevant; nearly everyone could relate, whether they're a rape victim themselves, or they've thought once or twice, "It could never happen to me." It's so true.
3. Chapter one is very scary but well written. Just to think that that happens to some people is a terrifying thought. But the writing is flawless. I'm definitely subscribing. :)

So I've only read the prologue. It was really great. It gave a taste of the truth without giving you it all. It kind of leaves you thirsty for more, you know? And I really dig the layout.

Wow, haha I actually came across this the other day! There wasn't any chapters in it yet when I saw it though. I think it was only yesterday. Or something.
Anyways. It is fecking amazing so far.
Keep writing yeh :3

This gave me the chills! It was so good! I'm definitely subscribing (:

wow! i <3 it so far!!!it's awesome!