This was... sad. It kind of reminds me of how I felt when I was with my father. It may just be the prologue but it's already pulling a heartstring. This was written beautifully but that isn't unusual. Your writing always amazes me. Just the way you word them, they're always great. I'm not sure what else to say. I kind of feel bad about it because I'm normally excellent with long and meaningful comments. The prologue just leaves me with a lack of words. That's always a good thing.
This was... sad. It kind of reminds me of how I felt when I was with my father. It may just be the prologue but it's already pulling a heartstring. This was written beautifully but that isn't unusual. Your writing always amazes me. Just the way you word them, they're always great. I'm not sure what else to say. I kind of feel bad about it because I'm normally excellent with long and meaningful comments. The prologue just leaves me with a lack of words. That's always a good thing.