20 Dollar Nose Bleed - Comments

Emily you broke my heart into a million peices ending this story this way. Save my heart witht the sequel and dont wait to long. Btw you need to start working on you other stories now that this is done

Emily I cant understand why you did this to me! You off Sunday! And I want Pete and Wednesday together! update soon

About time Emily....i hope you feel better.anyways update soon

Nice

Waiting....

Thanks for your comment.

I haven't been as strict with this one as I should have been due to the time period I decided to write it was very full of things I couldn't get out of. :/ So sorry for the mess up in dialogue. I'll try to improve. Thank you for your critism it's greatly appreciated. :)

I shall check it out!

Hi!

I stumbled upon your story while finding some FOB fics to read (they are RARE nowadays). And since it's a sixteen candles au, I immediately subscribe to it.

Interesting plot. However, I think you need to be consistent in your dialogue as I noticed a few errors here and there. Especially when both Sunday and Wednesday are in the picture. Still can improve. Nonetheless, I liked it and I do hope you update soon.

Before I go, do check out my sixteen candles au titled 'Only Liars, But We're The Best'. Do leave a comment, yeah?

Thank you. :) It'll get better soon. :D I'll try and update frequently.

Thank you. :) It'll get better soon. :D I'll try and update frequently.

Sunday is back! It's getting intresting... Can't wait to read more... :)

N'awww thank you!!! That means a lot to me. :) You've made my day. :) Thank you very much. xx

This is amazing! I really really like it - it's so different! I'm sorry I haven't commented before, maybe you would have had more comments than this - Don't shoot!