Falling in love with Joey Richter... - Comments

thankyou :) x

AWESOME!!! little things though, like at the beginning it says part of a line twice in a row (probably a typing mistake) and i think you need to spread things out a little. don't speeed through all the events that are happening too quickly cause it can spoil it a little. spread it out a bit and write more into the conversations. you speed through them a little too quickly too and i love hearing what they have to say in stories.
so yeah
LOVE IT and do write more :D xxx

WHAT!!!!! D: D: D: Did Voth throw his gloves down yet?? and yes i do know how you love the thing he does

JO! amazing :) sorry I wasn't your first comment... i read the first chapter at the same time as I was watching Sam do his thing :) you know how I get when he is doing that :) anyway, fab stuff! Am gutted your not going to the fayre tomoz but will see you monday! BIG HUG! xx p.s. Devils lost tonight :(

Yay! first comment! this is really good :D theres a few things you could tweak but theres always stuff to tweak in any story. i hope you keep writing this cause it would be good to learn more about alt he people youve mentioned like lottie and kyle and so on :D xx