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ber1110
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I really liked this. It was cute and well written :)
May 28th, 2012 at 06:30am
thouart
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Thanks for the advice :) I'll do that from now on.
September 30th, 2011 at 03:59pm
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I like the way you write but you should change up the dialogue cause it's kinda confusing to who says what. I think indenting with each time it switches person would clear that up nicely.
Good job though! :)
September 30th, 2011 at 02:55am
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