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  • resplendent

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    :') I really loved this story. Sad it's over but excited for you next one!:) I can't believe it's over! I'm going to miss this story. I really love it:) It's a way unique story and that's what I love about it! I loved the whole idea of her 'secret identity' as Mrs. Love. And her and Zach's relationship was way cute:) I hope they get married someday...:) I really like the last chapter. It was not at all what I was expecting, which makes me like it even more! It was really different than any story I've ever read, and I really, really liked it. Can't wait for your next story:)
    May 2nd, 2012 at 01:11am
  • louis tomlinson.

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    Freaking Mibba did not inform me of this update. I am pissed.
    But good for Music for giving that speech to the school!! I'm happy for her. It's kind of like watching a friend of yours grow, in a way, haha.
    Great job on the story, overall. I really really did love it.
    April 17th, 2012 at 11:32pm
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    You should definitely kick my ass square.

    My last comment is like 2 pages from this one! That is not okay with me. -_- ( I don't think that I've been this hammered down by this much work in my life & I absolutely LOVE [Have Loved] commenting on Mrs. Love [so much love ahaha] - there's no way that I'm going to sit down read chapters and put down a 'simple' comment. I don't do that. It's not my thing.) On the other hand, your writing is still amazing; :) the characters have had their own voices to speak out on and you've really projected that. I don't know what chapter specifically you noted that on but I'm sure you did lOl. The chapter when Music has to straighten everything out with people and get them back together was pretty legitimate, her character really stood out at that moment because she was portrayed as being more confident that I've read her as being. But never-mind that because the last chapter was very different. And that caught me up. You used narration, reflected, gave some insight and I like that you connected yourself to the work. The last line was my favorite :)

    -- Just Wow, I cannot believe that this is done though. But Nine In The Afternoon is next up :D <3

    Right now I'm actually working on a new Induction Trailer that's why I'm prolonging the update (hoping that I can draw some you-tubers in last minute lOl) just thought you should know that and not think that I'm completely bailing or anything like that :o Anyways, let me wrap this up >> next thing to do on my list is to check out Love That Never Left.

    Lmao, ahh - now I feel bad that I'm probably taking up a lot of space!!

    Or that I may be, might be -

    -UN-RESERVED :-*
    April 16th, 2012 at 09:15pm
  • JustUnRemember

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    I lost control of the use of the english language, sooo not what I expected, I am not even sure what just happened, but I seriously want to know who it is that knows who Mrs. Love is...... Grrrr. I might like apparate to you and torture you until you tell me. And to tell you the truth I'm kind of really glad that Emerald is pretty much out of the equation, I haven't really liked her, and then she's ungrateful.... *stomps off with crowbar* But you must, must continue this forever and ever and ever.... Really really, because it's good to have those choice few(stories) that are always there waiting for you, it's such a great feeling to know that I can relax after the stupidity of school, or maybe get even more stressed out by a character's desicion...... but it's worth it. :P
    April 2nd, 2012 at 10:37pm
  • JustUnRemember

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    Damn... Let me go find my brian and my heart *walks off in search*......
    April 2nd, 2012 at 10:33pm
  • louis tomlinson.

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    Aww, the whole moment with Music and Zach made me gush because I'm a sappy little weasel like that. But that was cute.

    WHO IS THIS MYSTERY MAN?! I'm dyinnggggg
    April 2nd, 2012 at 03:40pm
  • resplendent

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    :O Omg. :O I don't even know what to say. :O I think I'm in shock. :O This isn't shitty, it put me in shock. :O I just...I don't know what to say to that chapter. :O
    April 2nd, 2012 at 07:59am
  • JustUnRemember

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    WHAT. THE. FLIPPERS...... I just got my first update notification in like 2 months, and I have not Idea what's going on.... stupid update system, now I must reread :( (well at least it's a good story...) Darn it, now I feel horrid.....
    April 2nd, 2012 at 05:58am
  • PsychVampGrimm

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    That little jerk!
    April 2nd, 2012 at 04:06am
  • DirectionerBelieber

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    Wait, did Cameron do that?
    April 2nd, 2012 at 03:20am
  • June Blossom 143

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    So this person - whoever it is - told?
    April 2nd, 2012 at 02:13am
  • June Blossom 143

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    XD
    April 2nd, 2012 at 02:13am
  • dawn of light

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    Update soon? (:
    April 1st, 2012 at 02:05pm
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    Update soon? (:
    April 1st, 2012 at 02:05pm
  • June Blossom 143

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    Aww :)
    March 29th, 2012 at 03:35am
  • andgee22

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    Emerald deserved what she got. I keep thinking Mrs. Love will be revealed every time you post a new chapter. I'm just slowly waiting for it to happen. Can't wait to read more.
    March 26th, 2012 at 03:49am
  • resplendent

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    Ugh. I don't like Emerald. Love this story:) Can't wait for more:)
    March 25th, 2012 at 09:21pm
  • louis tomlinson.

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    IGHT YO SO EMERALD IS TOTES A FEMALE DOG LIKE WHUT SHE IS JACKED UP LIKE OFF DA HIZZLE DAWG.

    ^ fail of an attempt to be ghetto. Ugh. But still. I can't believe Emerald makes that remark to Music about Mrs. Love! GIRL SHE BE TRIPPIN. Music should've just told her that she was Mrs. Love; the look on Emerald's face would've been priceless! But props to Zach for being a good boyfriend, I'm jelly.

    And I know what you mean, my characters get drunk all the time and then they're too hungover to follow the storyline and I have to go out and get them Pepto-Bismol and Advil just to write one stinking chapter!
    March 25th, 2012 at 03:01am
  • andgee22

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    Ah ok. So this previous week was my spring break so i couldn't read both new parts till right now. First off, i love the movie One Day, except i didn't like the ending. Maybe because it didn't turn out the way i was hoping it would. Anyways, I know Zach is only trying to look out for her, but he needs to know that Music is strong enough to look out for herself when it comes to Emerald. And that was an intense lunch. I wonder if Cameron and Emerald will eventually end up back together. I have a feeling they will. Can't wait to read more.
    March 19th, 2012 at 02:09am
  • DirectionerBelieber

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    Never!! Kentucky alll the way!!!
    March 17th, 2012 at 02:49am