Fade to Black - Comments

Whoa... Hawt stuff. :o That was sexified!

OH I loved this XD!!!! good job!!

Oh, and I definitely you should write a follow up to this. O_O
That would be awesome. I wanna find out if Monte is as much of an uncaring douchecookie as he seemed at the end or not when he told her that it wasn't going to go anywhere.

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Holy shit, duder.
That was hot as hell. O_O
I honestly loved this. The plot was awesome and thought out, and I loved how Monte seemed a little less.... Enthusiastic? (Idk if that's the word I'm looking for or not) about what he was about to do when she told him that she was a virgin.
This was great, bby <333
Thank you so much for entering and getting your entry in on time. (and I'm really fucking sorry that it took me so long to get a chance to read this. -_- Things have been hectic around here recently, and when I had some free time, I ended up being too tired to give the entries the attention they deserve.)

This was really intriguing :)

I WANT THAT TO BE ME!!!!!!

......Oh lord Jeeeeeeezus. Where do I begin? xD
This.. this was haaaaaaaaawt.