Okay, I am so sorry that I didn't read this part until now. I'm so sorry I have been neglecting you! AH! At first I was thinking that this was going to be a super cute, innocent little truth or dare and then OH MY GOD. You always manage to ignite this Gabe fire inside of me, where I feel like if Gabe Saporta were to walk up to me after I read one of your updates, I would jump him. Whereas if he walked up to me and I hadn't just read your fucking awesome story, I would cry. I wonder which would be more embarrassing...probably the jumping him thing. Because he would probably think I was a freak and be like "who is this little girl on my dick?" I would then explain that I'm legal but the damage would be done... So I think I'll just re-read this chapter instead of embarrassing myself like that.
Rereading this, I know I'm crazy. Maybe I should post less revealing and less weird comments. But I already typed this one so...
Smut?! How dare you call that smut! It was like the perfect balance of Gabe charm and Lexi attitude (loved the porn star reference) combined in a giant (well-written and swoon worthy) orgasm....literally. I'm so jealous of your writing, honest to god. I could never pull something like this off. I'm going to work my ass off this week so that I can update for you because you've given me two and so many more dirty dreams...That's a good thing...in a weird way. I can never really say anything normal can I? I digress.
ahw, so good! oh lord, don't go hiatus on us, your stories are really really good, we will get angry at you! just kidding, if you really have to we understand but seriously, keep writing even if it takes a while to update!
A swoon worthy comeback on your part, if I do say so myself =) It made me long for a back massage...even though I completely despise people all touchy on me. That sounded weird but you know what I mean. And I totally agree with the sexual tension comment. The next chapter should have sex in it. As much as I love me some heavy ST I need some Gabe sex to help me out of this weird writer's funk I'm in...As always my star-crossed lover, you astound me.
I can't even think of anything funny/clever/witty to say. This comment is simply a placeholder until I regain my composure. God you make Gabe so fucking hot it hurts....I love you. Plain and simple.
Okay the Guy Ripley thing made me infinitely happy down to my very soul and the rest of the chapter I felt this uncontrollable urge to yell YOU GO GIRL!!!! I love a good dominatrix-esque themed entrance. Seriously, tomorrow I'm totally going all out for school just so I can do my 'Gabe-Saporta-Is-Around-The Corner-America's-Next-Top-Model' walk. I'll have a freshman carry a boombox with some good slow-motion entrance music behind me. It's gunna be awesome. I'll channel my inner Lexi and totally kick ass. Just saying that you are my inspiration! =) Stay Gold, love Haley.
Hey! Both of your stories are amazing, loving both of them! Please, please keep up! :) And omg the end of this last chapter, so frustating yet good! how come?!?
Clearly I just have to stop reading things you write, because I just end up incredibly sexually frustrated. I think this is a ploy to get me to write Viking sex ;] But still, it was amazing. I think I might need a cold shower too...
Thought process during this entire chapter, "Oh, dude they're going for it....oh, wait, nope...Oh thank god they're gunna have sex....shit, they're reeling it back it....FUCK YES! THEY ARE SO GOING TO HAVE SEX!...Goddamn sonuvabitch I wanted them to have sex..." that's really how it went in my brain. I was upset at first but Gabe's cute when he's all conscience-y so I forgive you.