d(^.^)b I helped with the teensy mistakes but otherwise it's awesome!!!! For some reason I think the pic I drew would go best with the next chapter.... you know the dungeon cell one? ;) :D
Aya: Oh trust me you know EXACTLY where she got the name!!!!!!!! *wink wink* Annnnnnnd by the way. tink. GREAT STORY! :D hahahha my favorite part is part two. so finish it chika!!!! :D