October 5th, 2011 at 10:52pm
You're summary seems interesting, and very original. They layout is beautiful but I'm not too hot about the red background. It might look better blue because there's more blue in the picture. But everything else is awesome. (:
I love the way Alana and Ed talk; most people in real life talk like that. This is defiantly original and I love that. I'd suggest adding a bit more detail, and I only spotted a few grammar mistakes. Other than that, everything is great.
PS. If you want, I can be your beta. Y'know, edit your grammar mistakes/spelling (not that I see any spelling errors).
Can't wait to see what all you have in store! I adore the layout; the picture fits perfectly. :)
Definitely... subscribed!
So update again soon, yeah? :D