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  • June Blossom 143

    June Blossom 143 (100)

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    This is great!! :) :-)
    October 3rd, 2011 at 09:26pm
  • Kiss Me Deadly.

    Kiss Me Deadly. (100)

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    This is really cute! I think that your story corresponded with the lyrics/song really well. There were a few grammatical errors every now and then, but not that many. Anyways, I liked Amy and Zach's relationship a lot; they seemed really close, yet they weren't, but finally got together at the end. I just think this story is super adorable :) Good luck with the contest!
    October 2nd, 2011 at 10:27pm
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