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  • KyLilly_Kid

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    Holy.Frick-Holying-Crap. WHERE THE HELL HAVE I BEEN TO MISS THIS?!!!

    I genuinely can't close my mouth right now...I'm just gazing at my screen in shock. That...was freakin' INCREDIBLE!! You have such a talent for horror...and all the little twists, and detailed imagery - let's put it this way, I'm not sleeping tonight.

    And the final two chapters (well, final chapter and epilogue)...I can't even describe what I'm feeling very well - but I'll try. Jealous...in awe...terrified...I just- AMBER YOU FREAKIN' GENIUS!!!

    I seriously seriously love this story. And I loves you a buttload more too xx <3
    February 6th, 2012 at 01:39am
  • CountSynula

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    Aw I liked the twist of the last chapter!! =)
    January 31st, 2012 at 05:40pm
  • Aimbo

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    Oh my god!!!! More is needed!!!!!!!!!

    That was incredible. I certainly didn't excpect that!!!! I am left speechless!!

    She woke up, and Josh...and....whoa...
    January 28th, 2012 at 12:59pm
  • jenniferbyars

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    i loved it are u doing a sequal? comment me if your are
    January 27th, 2012 at 02:35am
  • CaitlinGoesRAWR

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    I started reading this at 1 in the morning... Now I'm scared to go to sleep, I'm extremely creeped out.

    Very well done :3
    January 26th, 2012 at 05:58pm
  • CountSynula

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    Aw that was a great update!!
    It's sad that Teddy killed her Daddy.
    =( Poor poor Abby.
    January 26th, 2012 at 06:47am
  • PsychVampGrimm

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    This is the first story i read that is not i fanfic and i LOVE it! You are a good writter :)
    January 26th, 2012 at 04:05am
  • Bluenote

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    I don't know why; but I want Abby to wake up and realize that this is some sick imaginary nightmare. Then go outside and play tag with josh and mandy :)

    Lovely story. BTW
    January 25th, 2012 at 08:39pm
  • CountSynula

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    Aw!!I'm not done reading but I had to comment.
    I really find this interesting and unique!! =)
    January 25th, 2012 at 06:50am
  • Aimbo

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    Teddy, is the scariest villan I've ever read! Abby is soooo cute. There's something really special about the plot! Something really...unpredictable. It's not too gory, and its not too cutesy. I really like it :D

    I can't wait for the sequel!
    January 14th, 2012 at 10:37pm
  • paracosm.

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    I love your story! Its quite creepy, but in a AWESOME WAY!!!! Updateeee.....
    (Love the idea of a 6yr old killer ''haunted'' by her teddy).
    Dea, x
    November 24th, 2011 at 11:34pm
  • Pandakupikake

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    Love it!!!! Update again soon!!
    November 19th, 2011 at 07:31pm
  • KyLilly_Kid

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    What do you do to me with this story!!! :O

    At first I'm all giggly and happy, and completely forgetting about the costume-shop incident...next thing I know Teddy's got her, and she's bleeding, and it's fuckin' scary! I am currently refusing to turn around since I know the space under my bed will get me. I'm not normally this easy to scare; like it literally takes something horrible happening in front of my eyes to do that - but the way you word it, and the innocence of Abby make it all the more intense, and terrifying.

    <3 this, <3 youuuu xx
    November 9th, 2011 at 12:35am
  • alonginginmybones

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    Massively intense!!!!!!!!! sooooo creepy! goood job!
    October 17th, 2011 at 09:51pm
  • KyLilly_Kid

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    'Joshie and the Halloweeeeny-store laaady, sitting in a tree...' ;-D

    I seriously love that she was a Zombie fairy, that's made me want yet another outfit for Halloween...hmm, those black wings are definitely getting bought methinks ^_^

    However...

    Teddy's back :( And I'mma worried...'cause currently I have chill bumps up my arms from the red eyes in the mirror-thing; I think this time, he means business *gulps*

    xx <3

    P.s. Stop doubting yourself, this isn't filler - this is really great, and you are an awesome author and MBF! *hugs*
    October 17th, 2011 at 08:24pm
  • KyLilly_Kid

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    Awww! They're a proper little family - and just like I said about the older version of Josh; Great minds think alike eh? ^_^

    I LOOOVE Halloween! I wanna know what costume she'll wear!

    I'm a little worried about Jim's mini-frowniness there...I hope everything's oki

    Either way, I'm rather glad I'm all caught up - and this story just freakin' ROCKS! <3 you lots MBF!!! <3 :D xx
    October 17th, 2011 at 07:17pm
  • KyLilly_Kid

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    Chapter 8 feedback - SHE KILLED THE BEAR YAAAY!!!

    ..why do I have this feeling that's not the last we've seen of Teddy? :|

    Plus, I currently have an epic bruise on my left knee..it came from an over-excitable air-guitar session - yup, I'm that cool :P

    ONTO CHAPTER 9!!
    October 17th, 2011 at 07:13pm
  • KyLilly_Kid

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    Oki....just read chapter 7, and the transformation bit at the end made me feel really, really ill. Like Lena (ImFromMars - Haaaaii Lena! *Waves*) said...I thought Teddy would be nice; and now I'm seriously fearing for Abby :|

    On the plus side, Josh and Jim are going to do their best to protect her, I can tell...I like that Jim's like an older version of Josh, wanting to protect her.

    *Off to read Chapter 8*
    October 17th, 2011 at 07:08pm
  • ImFromMars

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    Ohhh, fist; I like the fact that you wrote the chapter from Josh P.O.V, yay for them letting her stay with them!! And second; Teddy is scaring me more and more.. I thought he was her cute, nice little friend, guess not.. If he hurts her though.. I don't even know what I'll do..!
    xo
    October 11th, 2011 at 07:04pm
  • KyLilly_Kid

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    Things to say about the three updates that I somehow missed:

    1) I'm really scared for Abby...I mean, six-year-old killer is scary enough - but one that doesn't really want to kill and was told to by Teddy in a dream...? That's the stuff of nightmares.

    2) When Teddy first spoke to her, I was glad she had 'someone' with her. Now however I'm completely terrified she'll never be free of him and he'll make things worse and worse and worse :|

    3) The way you write Abby's speech is PERFECT. Not too much cutey, perfectly matching with the sounds a child would make, and awesome dialogue.

    4) I LOVE that she kinda has a big brother now! I actually had a little tear in my eye (kinda an emotional day, and reading that made it better).

    5) I love this, I love my MBF, and as always I'm forever jealous of your writing, ideas, execution, and mad-update skills.

    xx <3
    October 11th, 2011 at 02:38am