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  • River Young;

    River Young; (100)

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    I love this! Its very original and fresh! There were a few minor, errors, but nothing that drew away from the story. I've never read anything like this. Very good.

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    December 12th, 2011 at 04:09am
  • ColossalWasteOfTime

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    I thought this was pretty good. Your descriptions are excellent, though maybe just a little bit over used. Nothing big, however. I feel like you did a good job setting the stage for the rest of the story in chapter one, and I loved how you added stars in there. It added depth to Kadri's personality.
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    October 10th, 2011 at 06:29am
  • Sleepy-San

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    :D I love elves. And I love this story! Very interesting and I can't wait to find out what happens next. :3
    October 9th, 2011 at 10:50pm
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