Fearful - Comments

Wow I really like it. It has so much emotion tied to it. I really dont like the layout though. Its really distracting and blinding. Try to make your own? But this was really great. Its really sad, but understandable. I could picture most of the things you were saying too which is always a plus. I only found one mistake though.

Avril had ne veer called me back You do mean never right?

Last I could say is keep writing and never let anybody ever tell you different.

june this was really good! =D
im glad its only fiction but it makes me a little sad thinking about what couldve inspired the story

wow i love it it is awesome