Black (Veil) Ops - Comments

  • Chelsea's Dead Smile

    Chelsea's Dead Smile (100)

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    I'm actually happy with this story popping up on my Comment Swap. At first I was dreading reading it, but I give you props for making it funny enough to keep me entertained. Let me guess, you got Carolyn's name from the Black Veil Brides song "Carolyn"; it's brilliant I say. I love how you made Jake find the Stone Of Horus, it more reminded me of The Avengers than of X-Men. I am going to subscribe to this story mos def!
    June 27th, 2012 at 04:04am
  • BlackPaintedEyes

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    This story is like Honey Badger: Bad. ASS! I LOVE IT!!
    June 23rd, 2012 at 08:28pm
  • i'm a happy camper.

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    I love how sassy Carolyn is to the guard in the beginning. MY TAXES PAY YOUR SALARY BRO. BACK OFF.
    Hjhfkjwenkfbkjsdvbhiebjkefbfhjwbh love it, honestly. She has attitude AND a badass name. Ugh. This is actually a pretty awesome idea, as I am a giant black veil brides fan. Good jib and keep it up!
    June 20th, 2012 at 05:26am
  • AuthorOfTomorrow216

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    I love this story!!! I'm so excited to keep reading! This isn't a love story which makes me happy... since nearly every other story on here is.
    KEEP WRITING!
    Please?
    February 29th, 2012 at 04:58am
  • clevelandkiwi94

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    Aw, thank you :) I'm so glad you like it. I'll probably be posting again either tomorrow or Wednesday :)
    January 17th, 2012 at 01:54am
  • Frankie Ro.

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    Hi I'm Kaitlin and from now on I will be commenting on every chapter of this story.
    Comment virginity is officially taken.
    Why is no one commenting on this awesomeness? Update soon xo
    January 15th, 2012 at 08:09pm