I Don't Believe in Fairytales - Comments

This is amazing. Love it.

Damn Shadows is a creeper! Putting cameras all over the house and shit lol

Im glad that Trinity stood up for herself even if Shadows did slap her for it, she needs to show them that she isnt going to let them bark orders at her without her putting up a fight =)

i love it!!!! and grrr he hit her. unfair! keep going. i love this story!!! :D

Aww man he hit her :( grrrr shadows if he says she belongs to him he better know how to protect her aww jimmy is so sweet he was the only one bothering to stand up for her :)

Great chapter! Excited that you updated. :)

I just found this story and love it :)
I really hope she takes jimmy's advise and doesn't give up. Don't them keep breaking her down.
I think she might end up with Brian.

For one... WOWZA!
and tbh I think you should hit us out of nowhere and put her with Jim :3
Still loving the story bro
-Krystal<3

I hope she ends up with Brian but that's because he's my all time favorite lol.Loved the update and regardless the Zacky sex scene was hott lol.

I think Vengeance is going to end up with Trinity because he could be potentially nice, unlike Matt.

Vengeance is in trouble!
Jimmy always knows what to say, he's such a sweetheart!
Trinity will probably end up with Matt or Brian, either one I'm sure! :)

Damn Vengeance is hot lol

Jimmy is a wise man, I think Trinity should follow his advice or things could get really really ugly in that house...

I hope for Matt =)

If Matt hears what Vengeance did, there's going to be hell to pay. And it might end up being taken out on Trinity as well. I hope not, but I can't help thinking it might. But I liked what Jimmy told her, to not let them use her as sex toys. Great update! :D

Oh oh, I think Matt won't like to hear what Vengeance did with her! But that was an awesome update, especially on that last part with Jimmy :) About the one she'll end up with... I think she'll eventually fall for Matt once he starts treating her in a different way, or she'll end up with Brian. Or maybe you'll make everything happen another way. Agh, I don't know, it could be any of the guys! Can't wait for the next update though :)

Amazing! I totally love this!! =)

Wow amazing. your a great writer and i cant wait for more.

Wowza!
Update soon!
-one of my favourite stories on Mibba :3
-Krystal<3

Aw!!That was a wonderful chapter lol.Pshh even though Matt is the overly angry one the sex scene was still hott!! ^_^ Thank you for dedicating it to me. <3 I'm gonna check out your new story.

Nice chapter! Can't wait for the next. I feel like something should happen with Zacky though, soon. Yes?

Loved it! I hate how Vengeance treats her... But I'm glad Gates didn't let him do something to her!
And I agree that dream was sad... :|
Can't wait for the next update :)

I really hate Vengeance. What a creep. Anyway, that dream was kind of sad, and then she ended up having sex with Matt? Can't wait for more! :D