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  • lady_enygma

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    Patrick's a hero :-)
    February 19th, 2014 at 02:07am
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    Aww I could see Patrick talking somebody out of this
    February 18th, 2014 at 05:36pm
  • La Notte Dei Demoni.

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    Oh my gosh I loved this chapter, you've written Patrick really well - I can imagine him helping out like this in real life. I like Allie, I can relate to her, and I can't wait for the next update!
    February 18th, 2014 at 12:07pm
  • Ali Cat

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    omg Ali please make this sexier! I'm so glad you're gonna revamp this bad boy! I read it a few days ago and I really liked the idea, I'm just glad you're going to add more and go over it!
    February 18th, 2014 at 02:38am
  • MsElizabethWentz

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    when you going to update???
    February 18th, 2014 at 02:29am
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    @ MsElizabethWentz
    It's not Very Happy
    February 18th, 2014 at 02:21am
  • MsElizabethWentz

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    i like this i hope its not a one shot
    February 18th, 2014 at 02:19am
  • lady_enygma

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    Woohoo! It's back! And it's going to be great
    February 18th, 2014 at 01:51am
  • lady_enygma

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    Woohoo! It's back! And it's going to be great
    February 18th, 2014 at 01:46am
  • La Notte Dei Demoni.

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    This is interesting! I'm excited to see where it goes!
    February 17th, 2014 at 09:49pm
  • lady_enygma

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    That was an absolutely amazing story. It was really quite a significant read to me :-)
    May 6th, 2013 at 10:11pm
  • i_am_dead_on_arrival

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    Umm wow. This can't be real, it really can't. Like holy fuck this was freaken amazing! I love love love Love it! You honestly should think about writing more Patrick stuff. This was really good. And I feel so stupid, because I didn't realize that Allie was one of the songs indirectly mentioned. I was confused and then I figured it out…and felt stupid. I love how you were able to capture nervous and bold Patrick all in one. I loved how you had her wearing his dress shirt and boxers - I think thats just the cutest outfit ever. I loved how you had him wear a Pete shirt. I loved how you made her just not really know who he was before. And then ending where he licked the chocolate off her finger…I almost died. So basically I loved it all <3 And you're an amazing writer by the way :)
    February 24th, 2012 at 04:24am
  • The Color Abi

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    This story is a smash of girly cliche's and dreams that we all have as small girls playing with our doll but it works. It's short, sweet and makes me smile but, it's not as great as your newer stories.

    You can tell whilst reading your stories how much you've grown as a writer. It may be only just over two months old but, honestly, you're so much greater than this now (and this isn't me saying this sucks 'cause honestly, it really doesn't).
    December 25th, 2011 at 10:25pm
  • laceyvengeance

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    this is a very good story.(: adorable too.(:
    November 5th, 2011 at 12:53am
  • cslennon

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    Ahh! I love this story oh so much!
    October 19th, 2011 at 08:27am
  • SupaJocy17

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    this is one epic story <3 lol
    October 17th, 2011 at 02:27am
  • Marissa1117

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    Aww, this is so adorable. I've read stories like this but none were/are as good as this one. :)
    October 6th, 2011 at 03:23am
  • erika_xtc

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    Admittedly I'd be freaked out as well if I stopped someone from jumping off a roof, but do I somehow already detect Patrick getting a small crush on her? ;) Hopefully update again soon? <3
    October 5th, 2011 at 02:05am
  • cslennon

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    Ahhh! I love it! Tricky's such a dream boat! :D
    You're just a bucketful of ideas, now aren't you?
    P.S. I love when you "shamelessly plug" you new stories.
    October 5th, 2011 at 01:23am
  • erika_xtc

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    So far I'm liking it :) I have a tiny request though, any chance you can make the font a little brighter? For some reason it's not picking up very well on my computer :(
    October 4th, 2011 at 07:08pm
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