Adorable! Oh my, adorable. I'll leave it at that and just wish you luck for the contest! I'll be telling the results as soon as I finish all the stories~
I loved this~ It was simple, sweet and absolutely adorable. Wouldn't that be a nice service to have IRL? Though it's quite obvious to me you've never been to Cali (born and raised, holla XD). I WISH being a California kid was like that, man. Though I'm assuming you went for that exaggeration on purpose ^-^
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA OH MY GOD! JAHGSDLJASKD;LASJDHAS NICOLE, YOU'RE A WOMAN AFTER MY OWN HEART! I was so glad I decided to have Zelman do the judging cause I'd be totally biased :p You have 10 cookie points I'll make sure Zelman knows that. This is so amazing, like you have no idea. Would it be too much if I would ask this to be a full length one? Lol or maybe you write something like it, this is really amazing, you're amazing. Love you!