Hunted - Comments

Neeeed moreeee o.o

Just started reading this and I love it guys! Update soon :)

I really love this!

Good to see this back, and I don't think Syn really sees her as leverage at her. I think he's quite smitten with her but he's not going to admit that any time soon.

Zacky could have been a bit more gracious about her helping him - I can still see him as being a bit of a problem. he needs a woman to distract him lol

And as for Jinxx I'm still trying to figure out what angle he's playing

Glad to see this is back. Loved the update

@ HanerJoy
Lol thanks girl :D We're both glad you liked the update.

awwww congratulations to her :) now to the real world lol I did a little happy dance when I saw the update. I loved it :D Poor Syn :( and I don't get Jinxx O.o

Brian would save a lot of work if he had shouted Andy right trough his head instead his leg when he had the chance, but if he did it, well, maybe Esmeralda wouldn't go live with Brian. *-* I see Zack's gonna be a pain in Esmeralda ass and Johnny might turns out to be her best friend. Loved both chapters. can't wait to the next ones! xoxo

Johnny makes a good baby-sitter, and the fact that he took the time to change her bandages shows that he's warming up to her.

Aww no what's happened to my cute little Zacky?

I agree with you Johnny always get bullied lol and he's very cute and awesome :) I hope Zacky gets well :)

aawwe she's finally with A7X, not that all of them seems to like that idea
agree with you that short-shit needs a little more time in stories- i mean he is a cutie-pie!!
ooh zacky is hurt.. hope he'll make it

update soon please please please

Johnny always ends up babysitting but it doesn't matter because he is awesome.

Gahhh! Cliffhanger kind of! I shall sit staring at my screen till further update! just kidding but oh my god I really love this story!

I looooved this :D I'm worried Syn is gonna be in trouble with the guys :(

They don't know who she is? Well I wonder how Syn is gonna explain that to the guys when they find out.

Oh no! They found her!
I have to know what happens next.
Please update soon?!?!?!?!
:D

@ synful_desires
Yeah I guess I do Lol

I never thought Andy would find her so soon! o_O I can tell that Brian fell for Esmeralda/Rosalinda right away when he first met her! *-* Great update as always - Ari you’ll have a lot of work to do, my friend! LOL

GASP! What if its someone from Avenged and Jinxx is a double crosser? Or Jinxx worked for them all along oorrrr he cared for Esmeralda so much he turned to work for them to keep her safe?!
A.K.S:It was amazing more please! :)