March 5th, 2013 at 10:43am
Hunted - Comments
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freaking stinking update soon like right nowMarch 5th, 2013 at 10:33am
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oh frickin hell jinxx and andy found her... YIKES!! i hope that Syn got someone watching her- if not he himself, and helps her out
yeah, she really stuck with him, without talking to him- that's not bad March 5th, 2013 at 10:27am -
@ shortygirl
we're glad you are!!! stay tuned for more!March 5th, 2013 at 06:20am -
Loving this so farMarch 5th, 2013 at 06:19am
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@ HanerJoy
Come out come out wherever you are lurking Syn!!!!!!March 5th, 2013 at 05:57am -
O.O ohhhhh noooo O.O they're going to kill her O.O Syyyynnnn now is the perfect time show yourself!!!!!!!March 5th, 2013 at 05:27am
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That Was Amazing!! MORE PLEASE MORE!!!!March 3rd, 2013 at 11:24pm
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@ synful_desires
thanks...i feel extra special now!!!
@ Star Angel
i'll try my best....lovely Angelina Shadows has agreed to let me write chapter 4 which i started last night!March 3rd, 2013 at 06:45pm -
@ synful_desires
thanks...i feel extra special now!!!
@ Star Angel
i'll try my best....lovely Angelina Shadows has agreed to let me write chapter 4 which i started last night!March 3rd, 2013 at 01:46am -
love this so much but now u have to update like right freaking now love thisMarch 3rd, 2013 at 12:49am
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You should feel special because this chapter was rad!March 2nd, 2013 at 09:01pm
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Syn, how I love that man!! Moahahahah!! Good thing that he's got a good memory
Johnny and Zee though *shakes head*
can't wait to see what'll happen next, now that she's been 'made' March 1st, 2013 at 07:18pm -
@ synful_desires
i love how you picked up on my attempts to make the readers feel what she was feeling....and i appreciate the kind words....i sat down with my nephew last night and read the chapter before i posted it this morning and he was like "mind blown!" i feel special!March 1st, 2013 at 03:54pm -
omg I loved this chapter :D He knows who she is, and I think he knows since the moment he saw her at the bar. And I don't think he's there to hurt her. I can't wait to see what happens next :D Update soon :DMarch 1st, 2013 at 03:39pm
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Dear Lord, this chapter, I can't even... You could write a book with just this one chapter! It was excellent and well written, with a lot of suspense and I love how you make us feel like Esmeralda: anxious, nervous, suspecting at everyone... I just loved it! Can't wait fot the next update.March 1st, 2013 at 03:18pm
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Ooh I was wondering if the any of the guys had recognised when they popped up. I'm wondering if he knows what Andy did to her, or if he's just stalking her to get down her pants.March 1st, 2013 at 02:01pm
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@ gothique4
thats what i was thinking!!February 19th, 2013 at 03:20am -
It was a pretty good chapter, I like how you describe all the small details it's like we are really living her life. Very good; can't wait for the next update.February 19th, 2013 at 02:39am
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Now why can't I have that much cash stashed in my purse lol.February 18th, 2013 at 12:54pm
Wow she certainly did make an impression on him, didn't she?