comment swap; This is very well written, although you should try to make paragraphs instead of indents. It helps the flow of the reading. It's well written, the sentence structure is good, you don't have to know who that handsome fellow in the picture is. :) Good job, keep up the good work!
This is very well written, although you should try to make paragraphs instead of indents. It helps the flow of the reading. It's well written, the sentence structure is good, you don't have to know who that handsome fellow in the picture is. :) Good job, keep up the good work!