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A Drop On the Window
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Hey I liked it. It was good. Write more of it??
Just a heads up though, to me the last sentence in the last paragraph.
"This was feeling was so foreign, so strange to her."
Didn't make sense to me.
Shouldn't it be...
This was a feeling... or This feeling was.... [I'm not sure myself even.]
October 5th, 2011 at 11:23am
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Just a heads up though, to me the last sentence in the last paragraph.
"This was feeling was so foreign, so strange to her."
Didn't make sense to me.
Shouldn't it be...
This was a feeling... or This feeling was.... [I'm not sure myself even.]