Don't Hold Me Up Now - Comments

  • Princess Massacre

    Princess Massacre (215)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    96
    Location:
    United States
    I really like this. I got to say, I've seen the abused woman trope in Sons of Anarchy fanfnction a lot, but you're the one who's doing it right. You really capture what it's like to be in an abusive relationship. Not only that, but I like that Tig isn't trying to teach her how to love again, he just wants to figure out what's going on in her head. I just really appreciate that.
    February 14th, 2013 at 11:32pm
  • GlasgowXsmile

    GlasgowXsmile (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    96
    Location:
    United States
    Joe is an asshole, you know how some people will do things to hurt their other no matter what. What a jerk, like he knew he would get murdered and didn't care because he'd do it right in Tanya's face. Ugh. Poor Tanya.
    January 23rd, 2013 at 01:42am
  • AshleyVC88

    AshleyVC88 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    35
    Location:
    United States
    Holy. Crap. That's nuts!!! But Joe needed to disappear and he had his chances. That's still crazy though. Great update.
    January 22nd, 2013 at 11:53am
  • Lynnekinz6

    Lynnekinz6 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    I love it, you are such a good writer. I think you get Tig's character down perfectly. Can't wait to see what happens, I hope Tanya doesn't do anything to herself. Update soon??!
    January 12th, 2013 at 03:18am
  • AshleyVC88

    AshleyVC88 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    35
    Location:
    United States
    I'm not sure what you mean by a trigger. Because I thought everything in the chapter was necessary to get the point across. If people can't handle real life topics such as mental health issues (real or not), abuse and violence, a well-written SoA story might not be for them in the first place. Just my opinion.

    That being said: Wow! Crazy! Hopefully Jax and Tig make it in time! Tanya is so going to be pissed. I can't wait!
    January 11th, 2013 at 01:13pm
  • xxanythingbutthisxx

    xxanythingbutthisxx (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    @ HardysBabyGurl
    Thank you so much, glad that it wasn't too horrid on you! :3
    December 19th, 2012 at 06:18am
  • HardysBabyGurl

    HardysBabyGurl (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Location:
    United States
    Love what you added to this chapter. I can't wait to see what the next chapter will bring :)
    December 19th, 2012 at 06:04am
  • HardysBabyGurl

    HardysBabyGurl (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Location:
    United States
    I'm really excited to see where this story goes. I Can't wait to read more!
    December 5th, 2012 at 04:11am
  • xxanythingbutthisxx

    xxanythingbutthisxx (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    @ GlasgowXsmile
    Thanks for that, I actually picked Tig for just that reason. He ain't right in the head, and he's not exactly a puppy either. Thank you so much for saying that I'm doing a good job writing him though, because I have to say, it's harder then I thought it would be.
    November 30th, 2012 at 09:40pm
  • GlasgowXsmile

    GlasgowXsmile (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    96
    Location:
    United States
    You know I was just saying to myself "Tig? Of all people to worry about this poor girl. The same guy who said he'd put bleach in the dead women's body to cler out his DNA." Though I am hella excited to see where this goes and you are writing Tig ON POINT.
    November 30th, 2012 at 01:43pm
  • AshleyVC88

    AshleyVC88 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    35
    Location:
    United States
    Tig is such a hard character to write. Because you don't want to write him just as the man whore (but loved man whore since he's one of my favorites) that he is but you can't take him too far the other direction because that wouldn't be true to his character. I'm excited to see where this goes!
    November 25th, 2012 at 07:15pm
  • xxanythingbutthisxx

    xxanythingbutthisxx (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    @ Legacey

    @ Legacey
    Thank you both for your wonderful comments, and I'm gonna start working on this one again asap!
    November 25th, 2012 at 01:06am
  • Legacey

    Legacey (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United Kingdom
    Please uPdate story this is really good and I can't wait to see what haPPens next
    November 17th, 2012 at 12:30am
  • Legacey

    Legacey (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United Kingdom
    this is a really really good story I'm interested how this is going to progress :)
    I think that Tig would be perfect for her I just hope he could heal, protect and help her out of her shell
    October 13th, 2012 at 03:50am