Who's this Guy? (Jake's Story) - Comments

love this story!!!

Awwww so perfect and sweet!!! Loved ittttt<3

nawwwwww! so cute!!!

I'm glad she came to her senses somewhat haha. I love it (:

Urrrgh why can't she just love Jake back. lov's it(:

Amazing!i love jake's charactherand omg he said i love you!!! really awesome chapter! can't wait to read more :)

Ahhhh!! amazing!!! loved it :D

I really love this story!!! amazing chapter can'ty wait for the next one :)

Hehe that was a funny little back and forth they just had,
but the whole Jake being good with kids thing would usually earn points with a girl

And yes it is true that teens are the worst offenders, but if you would have seen some of the kids I've seen just at the shopping centre they look like little demonic creatures

anyway, update again when you can!

John is funny!! haha xD great chapter!! <3

A twin! Nice!!

update again when you can!

I think i'm really starting to like jake xD and he has a twin omg!! amazing chapter!! can't wait for the next one <3

I hope she'll go with him<3 great chapter!!

Uh oh jake... xD great chapter :D

Loving this story so much!!! :)

Love it!! : )

Sounds like a great plot unfolding!

update again when you can!!!