I think this a really lovely layout; I think it compliments the story before it and maybe reinforces the story behind it. I think the red just really stands out and it's reminding me of the blood and what may come next? I also think this summary works well to clarify what I may have been missing in the prequel - I don't think I comprehended who David was, and now it's pretty clear that he was the one who killed the nameless character. :) So, this works well. :) I like how this story is going back to the place three years after the killing happened; it sets the plot up for something else.
To Your Grave I Spoke "I'm not sorry," he whispered to the grave. "I won't do that to you. I won't regret what I've done." - I really like these pieces of dialogue and where they're situated in the chapter. The first paragraph kind of hints at a remorse of sorts, just by placing a rose on the grave - or even going back to it to even do the act. Even the remembrance of the laughing and dancing and kissing makes the reader think that maybe he did regret it. But then he says he doesn't, and it makes you wonder why. It's good. :)
He no one left - He had?
This is another well-written chapter for a story that just builds on so much intrigue. :) I really quite like how you write it, that you leave things unsaid and that there's just this huge air of mystery to it. I was also just thinking, it's funny how when I read this I feel no anger for David, it's more sympathy. :/ It appears he doesn't have a choice in the matter of who he kills and this just makes you want him to be able to stop it all. May be reading it wrong, but that's how I feel about it. :) It's just an interesting chapter, and it contains so much for so little words. :)
To Your Grave I Spoke
"I'm not sorry," he whispered to the grave. "I won't do that to you. I won't regret what I've done." - I really like these pieces of dialogue and where they're situated in the chapter. The first paragraph kind of hints at a remorse of sorts, just by placing a rose on the grave - or even going back to it to even do the act. Even the remembrance of the laughing and dancing and kissing makes the reader think that maybe he did regret it. But then he says he doesn't, and it makes you wonder why. It's good. :)
He no one left - He had?
This is another well-written chapter for a story that just builds on so much intrigue. :) I really quite like how you write it, that you leave things unsaid and that there's just this huge air of mystery to it. I was also just thinking, it's funny how when I read this I feel no anger for David, it's more sympathy. :/ It appears he doesn't have a choice in the matter of who he kills and this just makes you want him to be able to stop it all. May be reading it wrong, but that's how I feel about it. :) It's just an interesting chapter, and it contains so much for so little words. :)