Make a Fool Out of Me - Comments

  • Under the Stars

    Under the Stars (100)

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    I loved the plot of the story, but I'm not sure that the ending was the best for me. I think he was acting a little rashly because it could've been anyone, he didn't find anything that straight out said anything about doing things with each other. I also think that if he really liked him he would've given an explanation at least, maybe even listened to his argument. But I think that you saw how strong their relationship was previously and how broken it was after and I really liked that part.
    October 14th, 2011 at 10:43pm
  • Hot Chelle Rae

    Hot Chelle Rae (100)

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    I loved that!
    It was so good
    :D
    October 13th, 2011 at 07:05am